Sick beat.
Sick beat Lejin. It has the classic 90's rap feel, which reminds me of House of Pain. Well good job on that.
After the 1:10 mark, I got a bit bored. Cursing for 30 seconds is not really what I would call rap or hip hop. I am sure you can do better than that. :)
Keep at it. Could you review back on my song? Criticism is appreciated.
Wilde